We are a Year 4 to 6 class of learners at Kawakawa Primary School in Northland, New Zealand. We are in Room 1 and our kaiako is Whaea Lizzie. This is where we share our learning. Please leave a POSITIVE, THOUGHTFUL, HELPFUL comment on our mahi.
Room 1 has been looking at extending our vocabulary. We created a brainstorm of different words to use instead of ones like "said" or "went". This will help us make our writing more exciting for the reader.
What an awesome way to show others how to improve their writing. Keep up the great mahi room 1! What is your favourite word that you replaced a TRASHED word with?
Kia ora My name is Taylor and I go to Ohaeawai school I liked your video on trash words it was so funny.If you want to visit my blog it is https://ostaylorr.blogspot.com/
Kia ora, My name is Joe and I go to Ohaeawai school. I liked your video because it taught me to not use basic words and use more advanced words in my writing.
What an awesome way to show others how to improve their writing. Keep up the great mahi room 1!
ReplyDeleteWhat is your favourite word that you replaced a TRASHED word with?
ki ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel my teacher said I have to coment. that was so funny!!!!!!!
Kia ora My name is Taylor and I go to Ohaeawai school I liked your video on trash words it was so funny.If you want to visit my blog it is https://ostaylorr.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteKia ora,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Joe and I go to Ohaeawai school. I liked your video because it taught me to not use basic words and use more advanced words in my writing.
Ki ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Harry my teacher said I had to comment. That was funny!!!!!